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Felix Martinez

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I just completed a short film on high-def video that's just been posted on YouTube. It turned out quite sexy and hilarious. It's called "Nymphomercial," adapted from a fantastic new book coming out November 1 by author Jay Nussbaum, called "A Monk Jumped Over A Wall."

"Ever wondered what would happen if you said out loud what you were thinking during a job interview?"



Mind your coffee if you're drinking and watching!
 

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Felix, best of luck with this! Hope you arent opposed to a little constructive criticism cause I think you have something that could be really great but just narrowly missed in my opinion.

I first said to myself: "I think the premise is great but somehow the 'beats' of it seem to be off to me, I think a little tighter editing could really help!" I noticed that there is a shorter version and gave that a shot too, but still couldnt help feel that the rhythm wasnt quite right. I think that the gap between the guy selling stuff on late night TV, a monk, a wall, and a lawyers job interview just isnt sufficiently fleshed out despite the pacing too.
 

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No prob, thanks for the feedback. We actually spent a lot of time on the tempo and pacing and that's what worked best for us and the "preview audience" we gathered feedback from before locking it down. But hey - everyone's got their own tempo, right? The short version downright sucks in my opinion, but we needed a 4+ minute version for YouTube.

The second set of bloopers are up - these are even funnier, I think. Clint trying to keep his composure next to Natalia's butt; me fixing Jolene's wedgie (someone's gotta do it); and Cates doing a mean Bill Murray impression with "horseshit" on him ;)
 

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