Chuck Anstey
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This may be true but as others have constantly posted: "Film is a visual medium." Stop telling us how much Peter Parker's life sucks and really show us. How about a 20-30 minute section where we see Peter go out at night, fight petty crime, then come back at 4am to try to finish a paper. Then we see him in class trying to stay awake and receiving paper after paper with D's and F's with comments from the professors that he will fail. We are told how he is screwing up his homework but we never see him actually do any. Then we get the "Rain drops are falling on my head" song and even more exposition about how his grades have improved.
I think the film has too many short sequences to represent entire months of time or represent a constant problem in one shot. The one pizza delivery represents all of the times he fails to live up to his word. Missing the one 8pm showtime represents EVERY time he didn't make it on time. The "Rain drops" sequence represents months? of normal life. The first meeting and subsequent speech with Dr. Connors when he was late for class represents all those nights he chose to go out as Spiderman instead of doing his homework and being on time for class. But when it comes to money problems, we get this one over and over and over again about how he has money problems but not how being Spiderman caused it especially seeing how his pictures of Spiderman get him the most money. Sure there was the one job firing but there are other jobs.
I agree that Spidey villians are not world dominators so the smaller scale works just fine but it would have been nice to see more than the one bank scene where Doc Ock steals some of the money. It seemed clear to me from the stuff lying around when he was working that he stole more than once to order (steal maybe?) the material he was assembling.
As I said in the review thread, I liked the movie and I am sure it will grow on me over time but I did not think it was great.
Chuck