Seth Paxton
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Of all the problems pointed out, none hurt it as bad as the writing in the last act. Too many pieces of expository dialog.
"I will now open this because it is important that I do so"
"James, you have done it. We have escaped."
Not the real dialog of course, but roughly a lot like it. Ugh.
This is not to say that those other problems don't matter as well.
"I will now open this because it is important that I do so"
"James, you have done it. We have escaped."
Not the real dialog of course, but roughly a lot like it. Ugh.
This is not to say that those other problems don't matter as well.