Paul D G
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Only just finally found time to watch the first ep.
- The Prologue threw me off. First I thought we were starting off in the middle of Zombie Apocalypse, then I realized we weren't and expected the gas station scene to repeat later in the ep, then it didn't. I assume it takes place between when he leaves for Atalanta, to when he finds the farmhouse. The should have cut to him shooting the zombie girl to place it, or leaving the gas station at least.
- The hospital-coma-awakening we've, of course, seen before. But really, if you want your character to not know what's been happening in the world over the past month what else do you do? I was frustrated he never expressed confusion as to what was going on, you know, like a "what the hell's going on?!" would have been appropriate. Or the expression that maybe he's hallucinating (having just woken up). The lack of ANY sort of backstory was a little frustrating. Something vague would have been fine, like "there were reports of an outbreak in Ethiopia, and within a week it had spread to London and New York. A week later it was all over..."
- I was disappointed that the pilot was fairly formulaic. The father-seeking-his-family is a pretty familiar theme in zombie horror. See Brian Keene's The Rising, for example or Stephen King's Cell.
- Sort of shocked by the Feast at the end of the film. It was scenes like this that forced the original Dawn of the Dead into Unrated territory!
So, I wasn't 100% happy with the premiere, but if it's zombies, I'm sticking with it.
- The Prologue threw me off. First I thought we were starting off in the middle of Zombie Apocalypse, then I realized we weren't and expected the gas station scene to repeat later in the ep, then it didn't. I assume it takes place between when he leaves for Atalanta, to when he finds the farmhouse. The should have cut to him shooting the zombie girl to place it, or leaving the gas station at least.
- The hospital-coma-awakening we've, of course, seen before. But really, if you want your character to not know what's been happening in the world over the past month what else do you do? I was frustrated he never expressed confusion as to what was going on, you know, like a "what the hell's going on?!" would have been appropriate. Or the expression that maybe he's hallucinating (having just woken up). The lack of ANY sort of backstory was a little frustrating. Something vague would have been fine, like "there were reports of an outbreak in Ethiopia, and within a week it had spread to London and New York. A week later it was all over..."
- I was disappointed that the pilot was fairly formulaic. The father-seeking-his-family is a pretty familiar theme in zombie horror. See Brian Keene's The Rising, for example or Stephen King's Cell.
- Sort of shocked by the Feast at the end of the film. It was scenes like this that forced the original Dawn of the Dead into Unrated territory!
So, I wasn't 100% happy with the premiere, but if it's zombies, I'm sticking with it.