Opinions needed on New Property Idea

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  1. DeathStar1

    DeathStar1 Producer

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    Wasn't sure we're to post this, so feel free to move it. One of these days, I hope to pitch this idea as either a comic book or a TV Show, but I need some reviews to help improve it.

    I've finished what I hope is the final version of 'episode one'. I've copywrited it with the writers guild of america, and the feds, so hopefully it'll be OK to post later tonight. The second episode script is also done, but not copywrited, but it does introduce the series first one shot villain, Nuclear Man.

    I'm posting the entire first episode script on my websites opinions page, http://www.twelveoclock.net/Opinion/Opinions.php later tonight at 6Pm when I get home from work, so any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is most welcome.

    I just MIGHT get the chance to pitch this to an animation company if my tour of their studios comes about, but I don't want to push my luck as of yet. Hopefully if you guys like what I have done so far, they'll like it as well [​IMG]

    Thanks for any input from you spead readers later tonight[​IMG] I'll post a reply when it's up....

    Neil
     
  2. DeathStar1

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    Hey all,

    I may be published sooner than I thought. It seems a voice actor friend of mine is in the comic buisness, and he's going to pitch the idea to his publisher for me [​IMG]. Wish me luck!

    But, here's the page now..
    http://www.twelveoclock.net/Opinions/Opinions.php

    It's all up there, including the first script...

    Can't wait for feedback [​IMG]
     

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