Seth Paxton
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It's funny how much people are bitching about the changes from Asimov when the base SF story was one of the few good things about the script.
How about the terribly obvious and lame character setup and development.
I mean first of all was this Demolition Man part 2? It sure played like it. Anti-tech hero takes down big corp/govt conspiracy while Bullock-esque sidekick in the system helps him along.
The script awkwardly flops out all the setup info it thinks you need in such an obvious way that it either screams "here it comes" or looks identitical to 3 other films you've seen the same moments in.
The "kid" has no reason for existence in the film at all and 75% of Will's lines are cliched even for him. Is this his MIB alien ass-kicking version or his ID4 alien ass-kicking version, he had all the same lines and moments as he did in those films (sans a dry TL Jones to make it funny).
And the action moments are often setup up very poorly too. Sunny runs into a room of identical robots to hide. That's great...except they are lined up in perfect symmetry based on a final build count of 1000. Now there is 1001.
Let me ask you something, where the fuck could he fit in that configuration without being awkwardly out of place? Okay, maybe somehow there was an empty spot in the array BUT THEN HE RUNS AND HIDES AGAIN. No other robot is displaced, yet again he has found his way into another spot lined up perfectly with the other robots.
Why does it bug me? Because the filmmakers are in control here and this doesn't have to be a fucking problem. Try NOT HAVING THE OTHER ROBOTS LINED UP PERFECTLY. Have them not quite finished or just standing in some general clutter. Now Sunny can hide anywhere because there is no order he must fit into. Wow, problem solved and you still have the exact same scene. You could even have some of them lined up and some not.
And that is a perfect example of the issues this film has, most of which come right out of the script. It's not smart enough to get us anywhere it wants us to go without plodding into it like a lumbering Frankenstien.
But the idea that the master CPU (yes, Viki was straight out of Tron) would take control and come to a "control humans to protect them, including some killing" is not the major problem here. Obviously Asimov dealt with such an angle at one point so its not that far out there.
In fact its a very Asimov-themed idea. In one of his other short stories he tells of how engineers conclude that a shield of a certain power/technology could not be maintained long enough for aliens using it to reach them, only to end the story with a reveal to a technologist who didn't get the math and had just come up with an alternate solution by trial and error/common sense (quickly turn shield on and off).
The point being that "correct logic" can be right and yet overlook unexpected results.
Plus, at least the film showed that Viki DID RAISE concerns. She simply was covering her tracks too. Her alteration of technology did not go unnoticed, and in the end she was stopped.
Her redevelopment of fundamental circuitry is probably exactly what made the doctor notice problems in the first place.
It's just like saying that Invasion of the Body Snatchers couldn't happen because people would notice the changes, when the whole point of the story is that people ARE noticing the changes but just not in a shared knowledge way that would help identify the problem until it is too late.
How about the terribly obvious and lame character setup and development.
I mean first of all was this Demolition Man part 2? It sure played like it. Anti-tech hero takes down big corp/govt conspiracy while Bullock-esque sidekick in the system helps him along.
The script awkwardly flops out all the setup info it thinks you need in such an obvious way that it either screams "here it comes" or looks identitical to 3 other films you've seen the same moments in.
The "kid" has no reason for existence in the film at all and 75% of Will's lines are cliched even for him. Is this his MIB alien ass-kicking version or his ID4 alien ass-kicking version, he had all the same lines and moments as he did in those films (sans a dry TL Jones to make it funny).
And the action moments are often setup up very poorly too. Sunny runs into a room of identical robots to hide. That's great...except they are lined up in perfect symmetry based on a final build count of 1000. Now there is 1001.
Let me ask you something, where the fuck could he fit in that configuration without being awkwardly out of place? Okay, maybe somehow there was an empty spot in the array BUT THEN HE RUNS AND HIDES AGAIN. No other robot is displaced, yet again he has found his way into another spot lined up perfectly with the other robots.
Why does it bug me? Because the filmmakers are in control here and this doesn't have to be a fucking problem. Try NOT HAVING THE OTHER ROBOTS LINED UP PERFECTLY. Have them not quite finished or just standing in some general clutter. Now Sunny can hide anywhere because there is no order he must fit into. Wow, problem solved and you still have the exact same scene. You could even have some of them lined up and some not.
And that is a perfect example of the issues this film has, most of which come right out of the script. It's not smart enough to get us anywhere it wants us to go without plodding into it like a lumbering Frankenstien.
But the idea that the master CPU (yes, Viki was straight out of Tron) would take control and come to a "control humans to protect them, including some killing" is not the major problem here. Obviously Asimov dealt with such an angle at one point so its not that far out there.
In fact its a very Asimov-themed idea. In one of his other short stories he tells of how engineers conclude that a shield of a certain power/technology could not be maintained long enough for aliens using it to reach them, only to end the story with a reveal to a technologist who didn't get the math and had just come up with an alternate solution by trial and error/common sense (quickly turn shield on and off).
The point being that "correct logic" can be right and yet overlook unexpected results.
Plus, at least the film showed that Viki DID RAISE concerns. She simply was covering her tracks too. Her alteration of technology did not go unnoticed, and in the end she was stopped.
Her redevelopment of fundamental circuitry is probably exactly what made the doctor notice problems in the first place.
It's just like saying that Invasion of the Body Snatchers couldn't happen because people would notice the changes, when the whole point of the story is that people ARE noticing the changes but just not in a shared knowledge way that would help identify the problem until it is too late.