DeathStar1
Senior HTF Member
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Hey all,
Don't know how many here might have read it, but I also posted revision 2 on another board and it didn't meet with such great reviews. So, I kept the introductino of the main villain the same, but changed the setup of how events happen with the rest of the script. Same events, just happening in what I hope is a more interesting way.
Interested in constructive opinions. Wanted to get peoples reviews on the firt half of it before I finished the entire thing..
thanks!script3
Don't know how many here might have read it, but I also posted revision 2 on another board and it didn't meet with such great reviews. So, I kept the introductino of the main villain the same, but changed the setup of how events happen with the rest of the script. Same events, just happening in what I hope is a more interesting way.
Interested in constructive opinions. Wanted to get peoples reviews on the firt half of it before I finished the entire thing..
thanks!script3