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DeathStar1

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Hey all,

Don't know how many here might have read it, but I also posted revision 2 on another board and it didn't meet with such great reviews. So, I kept the introductino of the main villain the same, but changed the setup of how events happen with the rest of the script. Same events, just happening in what I hope is a more interesting way.

Interested in constructive opinions. Wanted to get peoples reviews on the firt half of it before I finished the entire thing..



thanks!script3
 

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anyway to post that without me needing to download anything?
 

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I would have expected childish replies like the two above on other boards but not here. Grow up, would you?

As to the one legitimate post, I could cut and paste the entire thing, but it's a long 13 pages. Dunno if people would appreciate that long of a post...

But trust me, it's a safe file to download, as it's only a microsoft word document..
 

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