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Is this an effective trailer?

Discussion in 'After Hours Lounge (Off Topic)' started by Jason Adams, Apr 15, 2006.

  1. Jason Adams

    Jason Adams Supporting Actor

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    This is a trailer that I just created for a short mocumentary I made, called Slapboxin - The Quickness Of The Hand. It showed it to some family, and they weren't too inthused. So, give me all the creative critisism that you can throw.

     
  2. Thi Them

    Thi Them Producer

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    Is Roger your real name?

    Like your family, I didn't like it much either. I think the main problem with it is that it is too long. Cut it down to a minute and half or two minutes. As it is now, it's uninteresting because of too much exposition of the characters. Add in more action scenes. I think having a little narration at the beggining and end would work well.

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  3. Jason Adams

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    Its my first name...Jason is my middle name, so i'm still in line with the rules. [​IMG]

    But that is a common complaint that it is too long.
     

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