Frank Anderson
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Paramount finds this profitable?
Paramount finds this profitable?
I wrote three episodes of NEXT GENERATION and did a lot of story writing. On VOYAGER, I ended up doing a lot of rewriting and then, by the end of the show, I was rewriting a great deal. When ENTERPRISE began, I suddenly realized that I was rewriting two-thirds of the episodes by the time we got to the end of last season, which was silly. Brannon and I started writing together. We suddenly realized that we had a remarkable compatibility. We would like to write half the episodes this seasonNoting the writing involvement on VOYAGER and then seeing his "enthusiasm" for usurping the entire concept of having a writing staff on ENTERPRISE doesn't put me in the best of mindsets concerning the new show.
So, are we razzed for the season opener or what?I am, and on two levels.
For the half of my self that just wants to be entertained with some sci-fi, even if it's goofy and dumb; I love a cliffhanger. So I'm ready and waiting.
But then there's the cynical, picky, film school grad who-kinda-loved-screenwriting-class-a-lot in me, waiting to see what kind of half-baked solution they're going to come up with.
If I could to sit down and make the decision, I'd say to the production team to go back and start again, or at least change gears this season. You have a killer idea with a ton of promise. It has the potential to stand on its own without looking like a watered down version of any of the others Treks. Stick with the established time line provided by the previous shows, and you have the framework for some very interesting and entertaining television.
Better stories, solid acting, more thinking. Now get back to work.
The other thing I would say, and I've been saying this for years about a number of shows, is try being less episodic and use some two or even three part episodes aside from the season ender.
Don't wrap up everything so neatly at the end of an episode with a Captain's Log explaining (just as a made up example) that the Bajorans are safe on their home world and the Enterprise has finished repairs (not to mention a level three diagnostic) after we just saw it getting it's ass kicked.
Take some chances. Challenge the writers, the cast and crew to make a better Star Trek than we've ever seen, rather than shifting demographics and putting a Vulcan in a Seven of Nine outfit.
-g
p.s. With Farscape going to be out of the picture next year (literally), do think there will be any change to Enterprise? Nah, didn't think so.