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[Dome Vongvises]

I like your comic strip.

 

[Kevin Thompson]

A good effort. As someone else posted, there very well could be a market for this, but maybe not in the mainstream press.

If you need to refer to Tim's "condition" in future strips, perhaps you could substitute "zombie" for "partially decomposed corpse". This would not only save space, but it's also more specifically correct when referring to an animated corpse. In other words, "partially decomposed" does not in itself suggest the ability to speak or move.

 

[John Spencer]

Does it become any clearer after he speaks and moves?

 

[Dave Poehlman]

Episode 4

 

[Ricardo C]

I'd remove ythe quotation marks from the word "dude", but that's my only complaint. Unless Tim is being bitterly sarcastic, in which case it's fine.

 

[Micheal]

Or maybe you could have the guy who sprayed him say "Dude" a few times to make Tim's comment really sarcastic!

Great stuff! Keep them coming!

 

[Travis Olson]

I think the second one is funny, but I didn't really care for the other three. The look of it and presentation is great though, nice work.