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Would you guys be kind enough to critique my short film?


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#1 of 9 OFFLINE   Jeff Rogers

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Posted February 27 2006 - 02:14 PM

Its a short film of true life stories when people have accidentally pooped their pants.

Weird.. yes..

you can watch at www.sharttales.com

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#2 of 9 OFFLINE   MikeH1

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Posted February 27 2006 - 11:07 PM

I give it two thumbs up.

#3 of 9 OFFLINE   Jeff Rogers

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Posted February 28 2006 - 12:07 AM

Thats great. I appreciate the info Posted Image Posted Image Thank you
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#4 of 9 OFFLINE   Lew Crippen

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Posted February 28 2006 - 02:09 AM

Very funny. I liked the diversity of stories (adding the baby was a nice touch) and the editing to juxtapose the first person stories with things like the ‘Shart Institute’.

On the minus side there are places where the audio is a bit weak (too heavy on the left channel at times—especially the first person interviews and the end credits).

The time (a little over 8 minutes) seems just about right.

Good job (and good luck).
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#5 of 9 OFFLINE   JamesED

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Posted February 28 2006 - 03:59 AM

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On the minus side there are places where the audio is a bit weak (too heavy on the left channel at times—especially the first person interviews and the end credits).


I can only hear the interviews muffled through my subwoofer, so unfortunately I can't enjoy most of the film.

#6 of 9 OFFLINE   Stephen Orr

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Posted February 28 2006 - 04:33 AM

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#7 of 9 OFFLINE   Daren Welsh

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Posted February 28 2006 - 05:15 AM

That's a pretty crappy movie.
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#8 of 9 OFFLINE   Thi Them

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Posted February 28 2006 - 02:12 PM

I give it a 3 or 4 out of 10.

Few parts were funny. The first story was the best, then it started to suck.

I didn't like the voices being on the left channel for some parts.

I think you could've done something really cool with the baby's story.

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#9 of 9 OFFLINE   Jeff Rogers

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Posted February 28 2006 - 02:37 PM

This is good guys. Thank you for the responses either pro or con. Posted Image Keep em comin Posted Image
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