Finally, I'd like to put forward a candidate that will probably appear on no one's "favorites" list or anyone's list of great
TZ:
"Come Wander with Me" (
#154)
Criticized in Marc Zicree's
Twilight Zone Companion by production insiders, including both the producer and the director (one Richard Donner, of
Superman fame), as being "too soft", it's an episode forgotten by many fans of the program.
Instead of just dismissing it as "fluff", I look at it the way I look at the legendary, long inaccessible film,
The Wicker Man, which, despite its label as "horror film", I have found to be not the least bit scary. Like that film, "Come Wander with Me" is, for all intents and purposes, a
serious "
musical".
Wicker Man takes some nice music and fills the scenes with it in its tale of pagan religious belief. "Come Wander", on the other hand, takes a
single piece of haunting music with weirdly delivered, disconcerting lyrics and, with variations on a theme, goes on for most of the 20-some minutes of the story. (The DVD "Easter egg" lets you listen to the music in isolation.)
This episode's all about direction, photography, props, and music, not really about the story. One either likes it for those things, or one doesn't like it at all.
Plot gist: Floyd Burney, the "Rock-A-Billy Kid" (with such hit songs as "Your Tears Ain't Enough", "My Honey Tree", and "Don't Hang On" to his credit) comes to a backwoods community in search of a hit folk song. He doesn't care
how he gets it, either. He meets local girl Mary Rachel and does
he ever find more than what he bargains for!
The central conceit: The song "Come Wander with Me" is the
story "Come Wander with Me", and the story "Come Wander with Me" is the
song "Come Wander with Me". The lyrics of Mary Rachel's song recapitulate in "real time",
or they predict, the happenings in the story, even as they are sung.
characterizations:
The
dramatis personae are Floyd Burney, Mary Rachel, Billy Rayford, and the Old Man.
(1)
Floyd Burney, the "Wandering Man", is a little too facilely obnoxious, pig-headed, and clueless from beginning till end. He's
almost the stereotype of the big-city, carpet-bagging, up-North, know-it-all seeker and exploiter, seen first of all in his disrespect for the locals, but foremost in his naked and unabashed
venality:
Mary Rachel tells Floyd the song she sings "belongs to somebody else". To his concrete offers of money, she says, "It can't be bought. Not that way." Floyd (with a smug sneer and a condescending tone of voice) retorts, "Honey,
anything can be bought. It's a buyer's market with a pricetag on everything. All you gotta know is just how to find the tag."
And he shows that he's willing to snooker her with promises of escape, of material things, and, of course, of "love".
Mary Rachel: "And you'd love only
me?"
Floyd Burney: "
You, Mary Rachel.
Only you."
Her professions of eternal love are met with overt expressions on his part of his prospects for commercial success: "Yes, sir, I'm 'on' really run with this one."
(2)
Mary Rachel:
Asked to narrate what the song means to her, Mary Rachel declares: "It's the story of my love. I love you. I've always loved you", which goes to show that "Mary Rachel" actually
has no real character, and is defined only by blind love for the "Wandering Man".
Simply put, the
song belongs to somebody else. The
girl likewise. Burney tries to take the former for his own commercial purposes, but can only it get it through expropriating the latter as well. Hence, the conflict of the story.
The other two characters share a
non-personality, in that they do little more than stare and mouth words mechanically, as if doing so
only because they're supposed to do so.
(3)
The old man (portrayed by Hank Patterson, impersonator of Mr. Ziffel (pre-
Green Acres), Arnold's pa), who owns the shop to which Floyd Burney has been directed, stares blankly at him and merely repeats that he has nothing for Burney, and nothing
anyone would want. (In point of fact, his is quite an unrealistic shop, located in, as Burney puts it, "Sticksville", and loaded with all manner of musical instruments and gadgets. Who would be the consumer base for such an establishment in such a locale, one wonders.)
(4)
Billy Rayford:
Floyd Burney kills the youngest Rayford brother, Billy, to whom Mary Rachel is promised ("
bespoke") (presumably in marriage), when the latter threatens him with a rifle for trying to "spirit her away" to Norfolk. Key to the scene is that the brother talks mechanically, almost in rote, and never seems to look directly at Burney through his blinkless eyes.
direction, photography, and cinematography:
[I am not a connoisseur of the technical aspects of film, so I'm not really the one to talk about this proficiently. I have mushed the three categories together, though they most surely shouldn't be, simply because I do not know properly where one aspect of filmmaking ends and the other(s) begin(s).]
Mr. Donner speaks in interviews about how difficult it was to shoot a story where essentially the two main characters lie or sit around in one site listening to or playing music the whole time.
Presumably to compensate for the fact that, for a large portion of the story, the characters aren't moving anywhere, it is left to the camera to create a sense of motion and dramatic dynamism in the episode. Hence, the camera pans and zooms in and out
from overhead and through a lot of (fake) vegetation to reach or leave the characters, which has the effect of not only conferring to the audience a sense of motion, but also of giving them a sort of a bug's-eye view of the characters.
Other "tricks" in direction/camera work, which are criticized by Zicree (unjustifiably, in my opinion), are (
1) the recurrent move to Mary Rachel's alter ego dressed in widow's weeds and (
2) the pan to Floyd Burney's gravestone, which dubs him the "Wandering Man".
Why doesn't Burney see these things, if the audience can? Well, he's
not supposed to! He's not in control of his own destiny! That's the whole point! (See below.)
The shooting of the end scene is where mastery of direction and photography makes itself manifest:
As Burney stumbles his way to the rear of the establishment, the player pianos, mechanical chimes, and other musical instruments start up in a deafening, cacophonous symphony that expresses the inner tension and panic fear building inside of the character.
The remaining Rayford brothers, whose hounds can be heard nearing, are
never shown, only the shadows of three men with rifles as they approach and close in on Burney in the store. Finally, at the back of the store, Burney is backed into a corner crouching on the floor. The camera zooms in on his distressed and sweaty face. And, as the brothers come ever closer, the camera zooms further in until their shadows cover his form which goes fuzzy and the photographic image becomes a complete blur. Then is heard the blast of a single powerful, loud rifle shot and we are transported with a fade-in to the scene of Burney's gravestone, set off in fog and filtered sunlight in a small woodland clearing, where the theme song of the story plays softly behind Rod Serling's closing narrative.
How's that for salvaging a whole lot from "nothing"?
props/scenery: Unlike in, for example, "Little Girl Lost",
where the artificial always looks and feels artificial, here the artificial settings probably
enhance the look and feel, and therefore the mood, of the story. Use of studio sets with fake gray overcast skies and fog effects and the play of the gray scales with the (mostly artificial?) sunlight are excellent in promoting and supporting the lugubrious mood of the piece. The fake forest mixes well with the few real outdoor shots that the story begins with.
music: Unlike in a normal piece of narrative film, the music not only
makes the episode, it
is the episode in this instance, and everything else must service
it. Of course, one has to hear this melody for oneself to truly appreciate it, but the lyrics basically are:
Quote:
Come wander
with me, Love,
Come wander
with me.
Away from
this sad world,
Come wander
with me. |
The loveliest rendition of the song occurs in the interlude where the two "lovers" listen to and record the story and the song, while the camera transports the viewer, as if flying, over the vegetation to a not far away place where the alternate Mary Rachel awaits, pale, mournful, and dressed in widow's weeds.
(female voice-over (presumably Mary Rachel singing) to the accompaniment of flutes)
Quote:
Oh, where is
the wanderer,
Who wandered
this way?
He's past all
his wanderin',
And will never
go away. |
The lyrics and melody work in perfect concert to promote and sustain the sad, even melancholic, mood of the episode.
More generally, there is throughout the episode the suggestion
---that the events unfolding are part of an endless cycle (maybe recorded on a
45rpm?),
---that Burney has been condemned to experience this whole story over and over and over again, an everlasting repetition
without memory:
Mary Rachel: "It's always happened that way."
Floyd Burney: "Always? What is this? Some kind of con game? What are you talkin' about? How many other guys you hook into this?"
Mary Rachel: "No one else. Only you."
Mary Rachel (
passim): "I've always loved you." "Don't run. You know if you run, they'll catch you." "Stay with me this time. This time stay with me."
---and that Burney is, indeed, a
prisoner of his fate:
Mary Rachel: ". . . it's our song. It belongs to us and we belong to it."
Burney (become aware of the final verse of the song): "Then take it back! I don't want it! Take it back!"
Mary Rachel: "I can't. It's been used."
The ending: There is no "
surprise ending" here, since the lyrics have throughout the prior scenes fully prepared the audience for what eventuates. This episode leaves some people---Marc Scott Zicree, for one---very frustated in that it is never explicitly spelled out for the audience what the basis of the story is, as it is, for example, at the end of "Five Characters in Search of an Exit". Nevertheless, I think the story gives one enough clues to figure out sufficiently for oneself what is going on.
And, if the
central conceit of the story (see above) isn't enough, Rod Serling's final voice-over narrative seems to finish off the job quite well: "
In retrospect, it may be said of Mr. Floyd Burney that he achieved that final dream of the performer: eternal top-name billing, not on the fleeting billboard of the entertainment world, but forever recorded among the folksongs of . . . . The Twilight Zone."
Oooooooooooo!