Would you guys be kind enough to critique my short film?

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  1. Jeff Rogers

    Jeff Rogers Second Unit

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    Its a short film of true life stories when people have accidentally pooped their pants.

    Weird.. yes..

    you can watch at www.sharttales.com

    Any feedback good or bad would be greatly appreciated.[​IMG]

    Thanks [​IMG]
     
  2. MikeH1

    MikeH1 Screenwriter

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    I give it two thumbs up.
     
  3. Jeff Rogers

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    Thats great. I appreciate the info [​IMG] [​IMG] Thank you
     
  4. Lew Crippen

    Lew Crippen Executive Producer

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    Very funny. I liked the diversity of stories (adding the baby was a nice touch) and the editing to juxtapose the first person stories with things like the ‘Shart Institute’.

    On the minus side there are places where the audio is a bit weak (too heavy on the left channel at times—especially the first person interviews and the end credits).

    The time (a little over 8 minutes) seems just about right.

    Good job (and good luck).
     
  5. JamesED

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    I can only hear the interviews muffled through my subwoofer, so unfortunately I can't enjoy most of the film.
     
  6. Stephen Orr

    Stephen Orr Screenwriter

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  7. Daren Welsh

    Daren Welsh Supporting Actor

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    That's a pretty crappy movie.
     
  8. Thi Them

    Thi Them Producer

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    I give it a 3 or 4 out of 10.

    Few parts were funny. The first story was the best, then it started to suck.

    I didn't like the voices being on the left channel for some parts.

    I think you could've done something really cool with the baby's story.

    ~T
     
  9. Jeff Rogers

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    This is good guys. Thank you for the responses either pro or con. [​IMG] Keep em comin [​IMG]
     

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