Jason Merrick
Supporting Actor
It is a good script but it definitely needs work. I found my interest really only kicked in about 30-40 pages in - which I think is a little late. Also, without giving away any plot spoilers - there's an issue about balancing how much time you give to specific relationships, so that the plot motivations are plausible and the action is emotionally satisfying.Paul,
You have an amazing ability to read my mind. I have seen the movie already (at a test screening) and you pretty much described everything I thought about the movie.